Improvements from my critique, included the legibility of my "s" to the slightest bit and just a miner adjustment to a few of my capital letters. The "s" looks a lot better the curves of the s shape are now slightly more open giving a little more space for allowing the shape to appear more distinct. For my capital M and the N I simply added an extra row of objects to the far right stroke of the letter. In order to balance this addition to the letters I also added a row to the top stroke of the P and the R.
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