 |
| Before Critique |
 |
| Original Edits after Critique |
 |
| Further Edited I've done a bit more than has been asked of me as far as editing and I'm unsure if its a good thing or a bad thing. I was simply a bit unhappy with what kind of results I was getting from the edits I was making. There is a little bit of trouble in my leave of experience for these kinds of outlines, perhaps feed back would be helpful. |
No comments:
Post a Comment