Thursday, October 28, 2010

Making Changes

Before Critique
Original Edits after Critique
Further Edited

I've done a bit more than has been asked of me as far as editing and I'm unsure if its a good thing or a bad thing.  I was simply a bit unhappy with what kind of results I was getting from the edits I was making. There is a little bit of trouble in  my leave of experience for these kinds of outlines, perhaps feed back would be helpful.

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